I've written two dream sequences today, and it's taken 2101 words. They are dreams that I've had personally, but I've exaggerated them a little, and tweaked it so that it's not exactly like my dreams (nothing like getting too personally invested in a novel, right?). I know that there's another dream or three to add to the story, but I'm sure that it'll be revealed to me when I need to write it.
The beauty of writing dream sequences is that it doesn't have to make sense, but it does have to flow. It's a challenge to conventional writing. Conventional writing tends to be rigid, full of rules and regulations, similar to a still life painting. But with these dream sequences the conventional rules must be broken, similar to Dali's artwork.
I guess the only way to really describe it is to add a sample here from the very rough draft (please note, it has not been edited and I won't be going over it until AFTER I finish NaNoWriMo).
Paper scrapes across her path. The pavement glistens under the street light. Two nights: one above, one beneath.
There is a boarded up gate ahead with shredded remains of posters fluttering: some popstar that used to be famous headlining a main arena. Towering above is a rusty ferris wheel, no lights, no music. A crack of thunder throws her off-guard. She steps towards one of the boards, reaches her hand out and pushes it to one side.
It ripples like a curtain, and the twinkle of lights from the other side intertwines in a dance with the sounds of children laughing and Greensleeves playing in the background.
©Dreamwalker, Cynthia Cano, Nov 2010
It doesn't make sense, but it doesn't explain itself either. There are no apologies in writing a dream sequence. That's the beauty of it. It just is.
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Loved your dream excerpt. I'm intrigued! Okay, I was at the bookstore today and pulled out an art book on Dali. Coincidence or are we on the same brain wave? :)
hahaha maybe! There are a few synchronicities happening here, aren't there? I wouldn't be surprised if we're tapping in to each other. I love Dali's work - it's just so surreal. It really is a dreamscape.
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